Nice video Jerry. Was this with your new Sony Video Camera? I noticed you figured out how to do dissolves on the video clips. Don't know how your editing program is set-up, but in mine there are Video Effects (For dissolves, wipes, etc), and Audio Effects. Basically you put these in the audio tracks, and it makes a softer dissolve like transition from one clip to another. That way it fades out and back in with the video dissolve. See if you can find it. It may not be noticeable to most, but its a hard audio change in the video, when the video portion dissolves. Pretty good though for a rookie!!!
Cheers,
Greg